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修改文章Ubiquitity has become the most significant characteristic of global tourism in recent decades, due to a range  of critical determinants. This essay will try to investigate those factors and argue that more positive impacts can be found in economic, social, and cultural veins.Consistantly increasing international and intercontinental tourists are advanced by superior information and communication technologies (ICTs), expanding global commerce network, and higher desires for diverse living cultures. First, ICTs play an important role in the contemporary tourism industry. For instance, fourth generation communication technology has cultivated instant online services enabling frequent and international travelling orders. Second, in the commercial aspect, the emergence of niche markets diversified in different countries also needs more global trips. China Transsion, as an example, requires necessary field studies in Africa to bridge both information and capital gaps between or among countries. Third, the diversity of cultures also matters. Only in this context, can Netflix’s video streaming service be similarly marvelous in various markets and continuously stimulate tourists’ actions for cultural experience.Consequently, development benefits from the global tourism industry in similar ways. To start with, travelling demands higher communication and transportation requirements. In the 2008 Olympics, the traffic and mobile higher network of Beijing got great updates in order to meet a huge amount of global tourists. Next, the flow of capital gets faster in this process. The tertiary sector of Chongqing’s GDP reached its historical number in 2018 because of wealthy and generous tourists including a significant part of global ones. Besides, exposure to different cultures when travelling releases potential for cultural innovation. In early years, plenty of Chinese tech-giants including Tencent and Renren relied on “time-machine theory” that borrowing cultural elements from developed countries to a local context is an efficient strategy.In conclusion, advances in technology, economy, and culture urge global tourism forward and development gains more benefits in this process, reciprocally.